Our Place (An old poem)

Dear Readers, 

I was talking to an old friend and he reminded me of some poems that I wrote and submitted long ago to poetry.com.  To my surprise I actually found them from my middle school and high school years.


Our Place

By Katie Monique Mary O’Donnell


There’s a place in time 
where I can meet you, 
A place in time 
only seen by two other people, 
It’s the place I first took you 
before I truly knew you, 
The first place you surprised me 
by holding my hand, 
A place where I took you 
to wish on the starrs, 
The first place 
where we once wished on Mars, 
The place where magic began 
with music from our hearts, 
A place that turned into a Fairytale 
with a Ball, Princecharming, and glass slippers, 
A place where our imagination runs free 
where you can be you and I can be me…

Enjoy…until I can find more
Love Katie 



About DCKitty18

Aspiring Writer & Photographer, currently pursuing my dream of my own business. Add my personal page on Facebook: www.facebook.com/DCKitty or you can also find my pictures & writing on Facebook: www.facebook.com/PassionateFocus.MKO or see more of my photography at: www.flickr.com/PassionateFocus_MKO
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4 Responses to Our Place (An old poem)

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